Script- Porce-Lynn

Outside building

IN SCHOOL- Day

FADE IN THROUGH BLACK

Three students around the same table at lunchtime, eating individual lunches.

Inside classroom, Zooms to group of friends

PERSON A

I heard about this “haunted” hospital at Barrow Gurney, I heard that there was a patient that was never found when it was closed down for negligence, she still walks the hospital.

Shot of outside the hospital

PERSON B

Yeh I heard that story but as if its true, she was a serial killer, during a daily treatments some chemicals spilt on her face, from then on she only wore a mask. Its just a story to scare you when you were little. Her name was Lyn before she was disfigured, after she was known as Porce-Lyn

Closer shot of the hospital

PERSON C (Smug look on face)

You two might have been scared by it, but I’m a man you see.

PERSON A+B LAUGH

PERSON C

Alright alright if you’re so hard lets go after school.

PERSON A+B

Deal!

Bell rings

Pick up bags

FADE OUT THROUGH BLACK

ESTABLISHING SHOT, LOOKING AT HOSPITAL

PERSON A

Lets have a picture to prove we actually did it.

PERSON A+B+C

3-2-1 CHEESE

SCREEN FLASH LIKE CAMERA

Picture freezes on screen

Mask in background in window

Slowly zooms into mask.

PERSON C

Go on then I dare you to go inside.

PERSON A

You first then “bigshot”

PERSON B

Lets all go together

ENTER BUILDING TOGETHER

LAUGHING AND JOKING

Fade through black (laughing carries on)

NOISE

PERSON A+B TURN AROUND

PERSON A+B

 Person C?!

PERSON A+B LOOK AT EACH OTEHR

LOUD SCREAM (HELP!)

                                                                                         PERSON A

                                                                                         PESON C?!!

Run into same room

See PERSON C hanging 

Look down, see message in blood –“RUN!”

PERSON A+B running to exit

Cameraman runs behind

Doors slam shut

Go to different room

Person B +A heavy breathing

Trying to escape out the locked window

Person A

Hurry up! Lets leave it!!

The mask appears in reflection behind shoulder.

Fade through

Story Board- Porce-Lynn

Joe Jack Billy

Horror Research- Magazine

This is a film magazine front cover which mainly focusses on the action film Captain America, I think this magazine advertises and covers Captain America very well. Although most of the focus, if not all the focus is on this film, it would also discuss other up and coming recent films to the time within the magazine itself.

I think the graphics and use of colour schemes was the most appealing part of the magazine to the audience, I like the fact that the backgrounds colours (the American flag) matches the characters clothing. Although I like this technique, I would not use it in my work as this front cover is for a Marvel film and I do not think it would have the same effect on the audience for a horror film. If I was going to emulate anything from the graphic side of this cover, I would use the technique of having one main character in the centre of the page, I would also like to mainly focus on the one film, and however I would talk about other films as well.

Looking at all the text used in this front cover, I feel that it is one of the main aspects of the magazine that catches the eye of the audience. Most of the text is in big bold writing and it is all easy for the audience to read, the creators of this magazine have clearly put in a lot of thought into the colour scheme of the writing in correlation to the graphics. The text also talks about other films without going into much detail; this is good as it leaves it to the rest of the magazine to cover the other films. The best aspect of the text is the use of subtitles, they say such things as "Magazine of the year" etc. this makes the audience want to read it more and I would consider using a similar effect in my work.